There are mixed reviews from my critical feedback. The first sheet describes my work as 'unclear as a campaign', unclear in message and inconsistent in style. However the other is very complimentary and says it is clear, 'gets the point across' and 'gets the audience involved'.
Because of my confusion surrounding this I have decided to ask them about their opinions further. The people who wrote the first sheet said that they didn't understand what my message was because they weren't aware of political correctness in modern times. The people who wrote the second sheet said that it was perfectly suitable and that they agree with the message that was being portrayed.
Because of these conformations I have decided not to change my design, because my message is not to teach people about political correctness, but to simply comment on its use and recruit others who feel the same way.
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